Today’s Ponder Point . . . . .
Here are the actual guidelines to writing a news story, as posted on the BBC site; - (“and what they are really saying”):
Keep your language as simple as possible - (“your readers will be stupid.”).
Don’t use long or complicated words or sentences - (“you don’t want to encourage your readers to become less stupid.”).
Short words in short sentences are best because they are quick to read and more easily understood - (“we should all aspire to the same level of dumbness.”).
We have descended in to a darkness and succumbed to the expectation that nothing better can be achieved. We have surrendered. We are all drowning in 2 inches of water.
The Human Hum . . . . .
We know they are lying, they know they are lying, they know we know they are lying, we know they know we know they are lying, but they are still lying. — Solzhenitsyn
The Political Part . . . . .
USA, I watched the incoherent blundering buffoon that you unbelievably elected to be your President (not once, but twice) blubber on about nothing for nearly an hour in front of over 100 other nation leaders at the UN. It was ultra embarrassing, it was creepy, it was sad and insane. There was no plot, there was no truth to the rambling statements made, there was no reason for any of it. Still, there it was in front of the entire world. And no one stopped it. It was merciless on so many levels. Men in white should have arrived and wrapped him in a long two armed suit.
USA, change now, your attitude and arrogance is still repairable.
The Update:
My next book is a novel, and it is in publication now. It is planned for launch at the end of this year. It is entitled Mantler’s Shack.
When two bodies end up in the Danube, a resourceful Jon Mantler, coming from a simple life growing up in rural North America, struggles to adapt to the complex capers of cold war intelligence in Europe. His mother’s departure at age six, and his father’s sudden death when he was fourteen cause him to grow up mostly alone inside the tiny house in which he was born. These unique circumstances affect the way he interacts with other characters and how he interrelates with love, death, fear and aloneness . . . . .
Two Poetry Pieces . . . . .
ISITTRUE
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Is it true, that Mervin was killed by a broken fan.
Is it true, that the twins both took their own lives.
We were driving, just driving up and down,
On a gravel road, without making much sound.
We were worried, and we were losing faith
In a senseless town, we were outcasts.
What mattered then doesn’t matter today.
Throughout the thirties, the sand had been swept away,
in a most peculiar way.
Not sanctified, not symbolical, just blown out in to the air space.
What would you have done with it anyway.
. . . . . . . . . . .
Is it true that Mervin was killed by a broken fan,
Is it true that the twins both took their own lives,
In a sad stoic town, in a time of stunted stone,
There was a promise and there was bone to bone.
. . . . . . . . . . .
First problem is, - is what my father said.
Second problem is, - is the car had no lights.
Next problem is, - is we never went to bed.
Last problem is, - is there’s going to be some fights.
. . . . . . . . . . .
First problem is, - is there was a raging storm.
Second problem is, - is the car was missing a light
Next problem is, - is the police were everywhere.
Last problem is, - is the rope was a way to tight.
. . . . . . . . . . .
Sitting right here with an empty noose.
Waiting right here with these open wounds.
100 miles from the finish line,
Somebody should have cut them loose.
I had a wife and children, - I had happy hands
Worked through my troubles just like any man should
Settled down to rest then I bit the screw
Watched states and formations take the saved lands
Is it true, - about the fan,
Is it true, - about the lives.
SEGMENTS – SHE RAN
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she ran, and ran, and ran, ran out of the small shack and across the street; to an empty lot she ran where the paths were clearly defined and the grass beside was much higher than the ground and higher than her thighs. she could hear him running, behind her, feel him breathing, and knew that he would catch her, five hundred yards, she was running, and out of breath; she wanted him to catch her, not now though, but soon, she didn’t want him to know, so she didn’t know what to do and when he would, and how much to fight;
and which part of him to fight with, it would be so easy she thought, in the years to come, when she would know everything, know how to run; and then she fell, in to the longest of the grass, and she rolled, and she made him fall with her, his leg landed on her hip, and it hurt, and felt wonderful. he tried to roll away, but she grabbed his hand, and instead, she tried to strike him with her other hand, and missed, hitting only the long tangled grass.
she wished he would do something, but what, so she just rolled, and rolled, and rolled; in the grass rolling, and hoping, not to have to think, about what to do anymore, she had been thirteen, for three days now, a teenager, soon she would know what to do, run and roll; and he was thirteen too, and he is still running . . . . .